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Artist's Commentsshooting for color technique, theme is legs coming from random places. i think this idea is what i'm going to use for my final portfolio. should be submitting quite a few of these images in the upcoming couple of months. me in my dorm room...all that stuff is mine pretty much : ] oh, and title is from an emily dickinson poem, go figure. do the socks look familiar? heh : ] CHECK OUT MY GALLERY FOR MORE IMAGES LIKE THIS : ] Comments
hahah no i pretty much had to tear apart my room for this shot. and i agree about it being under the legs too, it was just hard because i was doing it self timer so i had to like run under the bed and i didn't want to like..kill myself on stuff haha.
-- my photoblog---->you'll see it here before you see it anywhere else, bookmark it, comment it, share it, love it! : ] I don't know what kind of camera you have, but you might want to look into a wireless remote shutter release. It would give you more time to get in position for these self shots. I found one for my D300 on ebay. It's not an official Nikon product (Chinese knockoff) but it works up to 120 feet away and for $20, you can't beat the price.
-- Whoever said laughter is the best medicine never had gonorrhea. yea i'm planning on getting one when I get my D700, but i don't want to buy anything for my sony right now.
-- my photoblog---->you'll see it here before you see it anywhere else, bookmark it, comment it, share it, love it! : ] end of summer probably.
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Critiques
It's good that you did not split the image in the middle, and favored the floor.
The legs are certainly an interesting contrast to the chaos of "stuff" and I think it works.
Exposure is 7/10 just becasue of the sheets. Comp. is easy 8/10... overall I would say this is a very good shot and a great concept.
Originality: I certainly don't think that I've ever seen this particular perspective and subject before. Definitely, I agree that it makes a humorous subject for a series.
Technique: The pose features the legs well and creates an attractive and contrasting shape. Your lighting pulls the eyes toward the center of top center of the frame and allows focus on the legs without distraction from the clutter. The only criticism is that find the sheets cast a harsh glare, but otherwise the composition is excellent.
Impact: I feel the image creates an appropriate mood and establishes a sense of nostalgia. Your composition creates impact well by catching the eye with the contrasts.
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